GunstarGreene's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Needle dick. BN Diss.]

My vote goes for this one.

I had no idea there was a battle going on up here until after I had listened to Broken Needle's track.

And now after I've head this, I wonder if it's really even fair to compare the two - honestly, do I need to say anything beyond that? We all have ears.

The only thing I can say that I think needs work on this track is, some of the lines feel like they're being squeezed in fast to fit the bar.

4/5 & 8/10

These reviews aren't personal, it IS a battle.

Madwigged responds:

Word, i didnt expect you to make it personal.
Thanks for the review man. I hear yah about the lines bein rushed. Somthing to keep in mind for future tracks. Theres always room to improve, well for some of us. haha. Thanks again.

[MadWigged diss]

Wack

I'm sorry, but this is bad - just bad. No other way to put it. Go ahead and give me your little response, but you should really consider persuing something else musically or anything altogether, rappin ain't your thing.

But hey, look on the brightside, at least you have someone nice enough to lie through her teeth to about your raps and score 10 on all your tracks.

Broken-Needle responds:

she keeps me happier than you will ever b=D

[E-X!!! Beautiful Battle]

Tis' Hip-Hop

I dig this, a lot.

I think you should try some more 'sample-only' tracks cause I really enjoyed this one.

5/5 & 9/10 - Only reason it isn't a ten is cause I'm holding off until I hear jamesvdub's submission, that is if I hear it. Nothing personal or technical at all. Know if this weren't in a battle I'd give it a 10.

EternalXIII responds:

K) thanks for the review! There are gonna be a lot more sample tracks coming from me in the very near future. I may go back to synths a little bit, but for now,I'm having to much fun sampling! I really want to hear what Jamesvdub did too! I want to see what he did with the same exact samples!

[GoldenEye 64 Statue Park]

EQ needs adjustment.

It's not bad, but it's not really a remix, this is pretty close to how the in-game music sounds.

Technical review: the bass is too loud and so are the chimes towards the end, a few adjustments and you'll be good.

Majorgeneral responds:

Thank you I will and I will post the fixed version later...and thanks for the review sometimes FL 6 is confusing to use. but I get better everyday (Check out my other remix's I recommend Megaleg techno battle and X-Naut Fortress) tell all your friends about me.

[Keyboard Test]

Your keyboard is working properly.

I don't know why you submitted a hardware test while playing someone else's music to the Audio Portal.

You put reviewers in a weird place. How do we score this?
1) You did not write the material.
2) It isn't a 'song'- the name of the submission is 'Keyboard Test'.

This isn't saying your submission is bad as it is more that your submission isn't really reviewable. You could have tested your keyboard with your own composition and submitted it as a song.

RPGmastar responds:

That is very true. It was kinda of a spur of the moment thing. I told my sister I was going to test out the keyboard and she said why dont you record it. So I did. Same day, I logged on to newgrounds and realized I hadn't really put anything on the site (other then reviews and votes.) So I figured, hey why not.

Next Time It'll be an original piece. (I'm writing a song as I'm typing this.)

[Franswa - God's Love Remix]

Nice

Very chill, I dig it.

Where else would you put a beat like this? Modern hip-hop? No. If NG had an instrumental or trip-hop category I'd say it would go under there, but they don't, so Olsckool is fine with me.

Good work.

EternalXIII responds:

Thanks for the review! Newgrounds should have a trip hop section! Man, I can't wait to hear your battle piece!